Opening Scene - Final - They All Fall Dead

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Opening Scene - Draft 2

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Shot Log - Second Take

Camera Operator	Shot Number	Shot description	Number of takes	Notes
Ilknur Kaya	1	Starts with a blank white screen. Camera moves horizontally to face the girl.	2	Tripod used so less shaky although a slight shake at the end which can be cut off.
	2	Cut shot to behind the girl. Over shoulder shot to show girl in the mirror.	3
	3	Close up on phone.	1	Slightly unfocused.
	4	Medium long shot showing Elise walking out of the room.	2	Silhouette and low key lighting gives mysterious effect.
	5	Elise walks downstairs. Low angle shot.	1	Very effective as focused through railings.
	6	Long shot of Elise walking out of the house.	1
	7	Medium shot to long shot of Elise walking into the woods.	3
	8	Medium shot of Elise walking through the gate.	1
	9	Medium shot showing Amanda singing and Elise approaching her from the back.	4	Amanda looking down and face not revealed which creates suspense. Focus on Amanda while Elise at the back looks really good.
	10	Elise reaches out to Amanda and talks to her.	6
	11	Elise falling. Medium/Two shot.	2
	12	Close up on Elise’s face to show expressions.	3	Could have better focus and more distant.
	13	Amanda walks onto Elise. Long shot.	3
	14	Amanda kills Elise.	5	Long shot instead of medium long shot would have been more effective or point of view shot.
	15	Medium close up to show Elise dead. Camera slides diagonally. Amanda sits down and carries on singing.	5

Shot Log - First Take

Camera Operator	Shot Number	Shot description	Number of takes	Notes
Ilknur Kaya	1	Starts with a blank white screen. Camera moves horizontally to face the girl.	3	Camera slightly shaky so had to retake a few times. (could have used tripod to make it more steady)
	2	Cut shot to behind the girl. Over shoulder shot to show girl in the mirror.	4
	3	Elise walks downstairs. Long shot to medium shot.	1
	4	Long shot of Elise walking from house to woods.	2
	5	Long shot which moves into medium shot of Elise walking into the woods.	4	Had to retake due to focus and the sound of planes and surroundings.
	6	Long low angle shot showing Elise walking into the woods.	2
	7	Medium shot showing Amanda singing.	2	Darkness creates mystery and fear as Amanda’s face not revealed.
	8	Elise approaching Amanda. Long shot.	2	Over shoulder shot may have been more effective.
	9	Elise reaches out to Amanda and talks to her.	8	More lighting could have been used.
	10	Close up on hand.	2	Better focus.
	11	Elise falls back and Amanda stands up.	3	More lighting.
	12	Amanda walks onto Elise.	4
	13	Amanda kills Elise. Long shot.	6